redolent of something

January 17, 2017saynotoclowns 13 Comments

I’m wondering if you could lift your shoe for a moment

I’d like to scrape off that thing I said

I always thought you filled your space so elegantly

I see all my lines are starting with ‘I’

I know I’ve read something about that and

I should probably take some time now and overanalyse it and obsess

I digress

I’d like to try and salvage it but maybe that’s futile

And wait, did you say you got them half price?

Ugh, you know I’m easily distracted…

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Soliloquy January 17, 2017 Reply

You were able to switch it up,and start with an and a u! Good job! 😛

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1. saynotoclowns January 17, 2017 Reply
  
  Hahahaha yes, thanks for noticing my progress…I do like to laugh at myself…and most things…
  
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  1. Soliloquy January 17, 2017 Reply
    
    I laugh at myself and veryone else does too. You’re in good company? I’m not sure that fits right there but. I put it there lol
    
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    1. saynotoclowns January 17, 2017 Reply
      
      Hahaha thanks for making my night
      
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2. saynotoclowns January 17, 2017 Reply
  
  Plus, it was the distraction what done it…I’d make s good lab rat maybe 🙂
  
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Rob @ justruminating.blog January 18, 2017 Reply

I love this piece

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1. saynotoclowns January 18, 2017 Reply
  
  Wow. Thanks Rob! That makes me so happy you do.
  
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emotionsoflife2016 January 18, 2017 Reply

Love it

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1. saynotoclowns January 18, 2017 Reply
  
  Thank you!!
  
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Ward Clever January 18, 2017 Reply

A trip through your thoughts, but did you want to take it back, or did they step on it to begin with?

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1. saynotoclowns January 18, 2017 Reply
  
  Wanting to take it back came after the stepping…
  
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  1. Ward Clever January 18, 2017 Reply
    
    Ah, that makes sense.
    
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    1. saynotoclowns January 18, 2017 Reply
      
      You know, those tiny ventings of tiny heartbreaks you try to distract yourself from…I always live with the hope that writing does actually help! 🙂
      
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