redolent of something

I’m wondering if you could lift your shoe for a moment

I’d like to scrape off that thing I said

I always thought you filled your space so elegantly

I see all my lines are starting with ‘I’

I know I’ve read something about that and

I should probably take some time now and overanalyse it and obsess

I digress

I’d like to try and salvage it but maybe that’s futile

And wait, did you say you got them half price?

Ugh, you know I’m easily distracted…

January 17, 2017December 14, 2017 by saynotoclowns Categories: Poetry 13 Comments

13 thoughts on “redolent of something”

You were able to switch it up,and start with an and a u! Good job! 😛

I love this piece

Love it

A trip through your thoughts, but did you want to take it back, or did they step on it to begin with?

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13 thoughts on “redolent of something”