the seismic shift
as you lift
from this world
the cosmic drift
as you slipped
from the swirl
memories knit
edited, clipped
from the furl
tears are tipped
heart is ripped
from the swell
it was time…
the seismic shift
as you lift
from this world
the cosmic drift
as you slipped
from the swirl
memories knit
edited, clipped
from the furl
tears are tipped
heart is ripped
from the swell
it was time…
wow that was beautiful
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Thanks so much Jen. It means a lot.
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That’s lovely. Thank you.
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Thank you, I appreciate that.
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I found this really dreamy and sad – a piercing melancholy of loss but also of regard and rememberance. Very moving my talented friend. xo
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Candice, thank you!
I am very sad. And I have very high regard for the person, but it was time for him to go. I just can’t believe it.
Thank you for your always thoughtful comment xo
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Beautiful friend, so very sirry you’re experiencing this, i hate to think you were or are sad, but if you love someone, sadness is unavoidable and it says a lot about your good heart. I wish you healing, i care and support you my friend ♡♡
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Yes, sadness is unavoidable. But it is always easier with lovely hearts like yours about. ❤ Thank you.
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You have me for keeps my friend that’s what friends do, they hold each other up and believe in each other, always know, many feel this way about you and believe in you even when you have doubts. xo
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I can’t like this enough ❤
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Outstanding.
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Wow Nicole. I am truly honoured you think so. Thank you!
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