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  1. A powerful and excellent continuation of the theme Vanessa. Sometimes the emotions are so intense the brain struggles to turn it into words. You have managed that with this poem.

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    1. Thank you Davy, so much. that’s exactly what happened.
      And the writers of this song, so moved by the utter despair of those finally fleeing a place, only to be rejected at the other end. Just can’t imagine.
      Thank you for the compliment. I’m honoured. Because I felt it failed miserably, but I decided to just publish it anyway.

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