harmonies pierce
with an arching linger
from those past knowings
we haven’t spent
forming familiar sounds,
floating
on to hushed hearts
in aching newness,
hands clasped while treading,
paths parallel but converging,
as deep translates
the haunting of melody
say no to clowns 
This is beautiful!
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Thank you! It means so much to me you think so!
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😊 😊 😊
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Those Icelandic kids really make some incredible folk music.
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Don’t they? Ugh, I’m probably repetitive, but gosh darn, can’t get them out of my head. There’s something about Iceland that produces plain musical awesomeness. The emotions they capture, you can imagine the scenery…
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yeah for sure. It’ so cold all of the time, I guess all you have to do is sit around the fire and jam
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So, I’m pretty intuitive and I am sensing that you aren’t a fan of cold weather… 🙂
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No I actually love it. Just wouldn’t want 10 months of it 😉
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haha, good point. I love it too!
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It is wonderful Vanessa how songs, not only carry their own words and rhythms, but carry our emotions and pictures of times gone by. You have captured this in your poem.
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Thank you so much!
I’m so impressed at how much they capture in their music.
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so real
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Thanks Anthony. I am interested to know more what you mean if you have the time?
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The longing..the idealism.. the disappointment.. love as song..tears as notes.. I don’t know..that’s what I got from it. 😉
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Thanks for that.
I agree. I think it’s a gorgeous song, but it’s sung perfectly too. It’s kind of an artistic tragedy when you have the right song but it’s not expressed rightly, or, I guess, in the way I would like it hahaha
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So, what song are you today?
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Still thinking on that. More upbeat…but there are different things going around. You know, when I first started blogging, I really had no idea what was going to happen. but I have definitely found it hard to have a poem without music.
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I still have last night’s Flume song on a loop
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Flume are performing at a local festival in a couple of months..maybe I’ll check it out if I can find a date. 🙂
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I’ve never seen him live. You should go and let us know what it’s like.
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I just might 😉
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Beautiful song! Iceland? I am going to Iceland this summer… need to dig deeper into your back catalog and get more suggestions! These lines::
hands clasped while treading
paths parallel but converging
as deep translates
the haunting of melody
I love everything about them.
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Isn’t it beautiful? I am in love with it.
You are going to Iceland? Really? I am jealous! Work or play?
And thank you so much, I am so honoured!!
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That first lyric, home,
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Hi Jen, was this an incomplete thought?
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Yes and no. And that was an incomplete answer… ☺
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That crazy comma threw me 😛
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Beautiful, V!
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Hi Vidur! How are you?
And thank you! I’m so happy you think so.
My gosh, how I love this song. I love how laid back they are, but then this profound gorgeousness comes out!
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Hello Vanessa! Good to hear from you. Am well, thank you. Hope all well with you too. What a beautiful share! 🙂
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I’m glad all is well! Things are not too bad here either. Plus, we are having the most beautiful spring weather right now.
And thank you! 🙂
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