flow and ebb
lyrics’ webb
unseen scales
empty trails
of light unburst
municipal thirst
for meaningful muse
the clowns left clues
the wrong grave’s exhumed
(*see calendar)
lazy thinking
drowning/drinking
I’m not down for this up
inflatable cup
no thanks.
You can’t hear
what I’m not saying
unplug your ears
of all your preying
then light the fuse
follow the clues
or not.
Short sentences
are my drop,
they’re not wafting
to your heights…
Β¬
Inspired by one of my favourite, satirical sites, Scarfolk Council, from their Facebook page, where every Friday is Friday the 13th.
This was, clearly, a very uncharacteristic (cough) stream of thought…but I had been in the sun for a bit…
Very enjoyable, a kind of spoken modern jazz feel, lots of apparent contradictions, and a take-it-or-leave-it message. I don’t know what happened to the zombie, mind you, but coool. π
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Hey Steve! Thank you. I’m not sure exactly what happened…I got out my brand new trusty note book after I laughed my head off at this calendar, started writing, realised that I was getting madder and sadder as I wrote (thinking about the latest Hollywood scandal) and it kind of all blended into this…
I’m really glad you liked it. It kind of encapsulates my generally bewildered state, although not surprised either, if you know what I mean?
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Just keep blending Vanessa. π Yes, I do know what you mean, and it’s kind of sad that we’re no longer surprised by such terrible behaviour.
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Indeed! Never have been able to relate to the obsession of Hollywood, nor the White House’s ongoing obsession with it…that’s a whole other long conversation, though, right?
Thanks, always, for your support! β¦
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Me either, and in a world with more and more interconnectivity, Hollywood stars shine more brightly and the obsession grows …
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The power in Hollywood has always baffled and disgusted me quite frankly. And the White house’s connection. It’s true, I am so very sad I am not surprised by this, but awfully glad it’s come to light, of course.
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Extremely lyrical…so modern and freshπ
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Thank you! I always appreciate your feedback π
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This has a nice rhythm to it as well as the words π
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Hi! Thank you!
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Oh my! Thank you! You honour me! π
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I love your writing! β€
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Gah! that means so much! and I just read your about page post…holy moly, I struggle with that thing, but I so love reading other people’s which is why I forced myself to do one. I love what you wrote!! I was going to rewrite mine but i’m just too lazy haha β€ oh that cat lady video is hilarious!!!!
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I love that cat lady video! Hahahaha! Why is an About Me page so dang difficult??? I enjoy others’ About Me pages. β€ I freaking adore you, V.
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Awww thank you. I don’t deserve it from your darn amazing self!!!! Ugh, I have to go, but I do want to email you…a couple things in your book that broke my heart. Hope you’re doing okay β€
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You deserve it all. β€ Please do email me when you can. I am doing okay, thank you. I hope you're getting on well, too. Love to you, V. β€ β€
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Where do we start with this Vanessa. It is like Spike Milligan on various substances. I really enjoyed it and could you explain what Sun is? π
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oh my, Spike Milligan! It’s been years!!
And when I say ‘sun’ I mean ‘sun’…haha it was the first really warm day in awhile and I scribbled this as we picnicked by the river on Sunday, you know, after a glass of wine…
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Now wine I know Vanessa π We are about to experience the tail end of a hurricane here in the UK and the sun has gone a funny colour. Almost merlot like.
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Really?
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It is more an orangy red type Merlot Vanessa, but there is a strange calm that has descended.
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hmmmmm I remember when we lived in the States, and the awful calm before a tornado went through, as well as the sometimes very eerie green light in the atmosphere…shudder.
Can you take a photo? Could be an interesting post?
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I will Vanessa although my photography skills are on a par with my poetry lol π
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Excellent. Should be very entertaining to say the least π
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If this is you being in the sun, then I’m locking you outside! With a pencil and paper of course. How smart and entertaining you are!
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Oh my gosh, how generous!
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I get a thrill from reminding gifted folk of their talents. π
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