She drew back the curtains with all the care that wasn’t in the world. It was the only way she knew how. To stop the time. To restart his breathing.
(I could have that wrong – it might be, that she was the only one who knew how to do it. No one remembered. No one cared.)
The air was so thick with the calligraphy they had forced out of him. She uncurled it and admired it in the twilight/non-time. All things considered, it was still exquisite.
She had a new idea. And when he read her thought, he sat bolt up right, smiling.
❤️❤️Ohhh Vanessa!!! You are writing so hauntingly beautiful. Every time it ends I think give me
More!! 😊😊😊
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Thank you so much Daina! That means so much to me ❤
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Keep it up girl!!! ❤️❤️
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xo
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Lovely!
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Hi! Thank you! That means so much to me!
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Oh man! This: The air was so thick with the calligraphy they had forced out of him. She uncurled it and admired it in the twilight/non-time. All things considered, it was still exquisite.
F’n Amazing!
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Wow. That is my first “F’n amazing”. I’m honoured!
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🤓
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Lol. Seriously. It still works.
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Oh dear! This is captivating.
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Hi!
Thank you, I’m so glad you think so 🌸
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Yes, a beautiful piece, Vanessa. I don’t understand it which is great, and so beautiful I have to repeat myself. 💟
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Thanks Steve! I’m so happy you think it’s beautiful!
(Haha i love that you like not understanding it. You can read it how you wish…I imagined it in the future…and then I don’t really remember what else I was thinking…lol.)
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My pleasure. It leaves space for the reader’s imagination. I imagined extraterrestrial zombie vampires from the planet of darkness. Hold on, sorry, that happened while I was watching the news. And it wasn’t my imagination. 😸
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Hahaha
Ugh! No kidding!!
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Love it Vanessa!
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Hi Jen!!
Thank you! ❤
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love it when you write like this, the contradiction is the beauty you possess in your compassionate soul.
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Thanks Gina! 💕
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Another Vanessa classic with cryptic clues scattered everywhere. Art can do this to you, help and stop you breathing at the same time 🙂
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Thanks Davy! 😊
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Gorgeous .. wow!…:)
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hi!
Thank you! I love that you think so ❤️
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🙂
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