Her breath pliable, she crouched down in that corner, the one that didn’t fit like a glove.
Her movements were whispers, soft and borrowed from someone she couldn’t remember, but they had told her to use them in times such as these. The movements abandoned her though, as she started crying the music her mother used to sing to her.
Ah, this is intense and raw.
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Hi! Thank you.
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Have you ever seen the show The OA? the talk of “the movements” reminded me of it. I HIGHLY recommend that show.
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Hi! No, I haven’t. Interesting. Thanks for the recommendation ๐ค
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Beautiful prose โค๏ธ
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Hey there!!
Thank you โค๏ธ
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Deep and intense.beautifully penned
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Thanks so much! ๐ธ
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You are very welcome.๐
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Very nice, and I almost tripped over running to get this song from the Apple Music store! ๐ Iโll call it my Va Va Voom list! ๐ธ๐ธ
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Thank you!
haha oh my gosh, her music haunts my heart! So glad you like it!! โค๏ธ
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Evocatively done.
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Thanks Yasmin! ๐ฆ
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Such a deeply and intense prose poetic write.
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Thank you Charlie ๐ผ
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Intense, Vanessa, and a terrible, helpless feeling to it, intensified by those semi-autonomous movements. Thank you for sharing it.
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Hey Steve. I always really appreciate your thoughts, thank you!
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De nada, Vanessa.
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I’m just curious if that is from the wood ducks? ๐
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Yes indeed, the wood ducks a multilingual, while I speak 50% of an unknown language.๐ธ
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unknown to yourself, or others? (I just drank some decaf)
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To me, at least. The 50% I speak is the spaces between the sounds. The various species of birds around here were carrying on with a lot of noise, but now they’ve suddenly stopped. If it was a movie, that would mean a gigantic wombat or whatever was approaching. So decaf coffee break for me too, before it’s too late. And cake.
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hahaha how funny, we were talking about giant wombats just yesterday. I am assuming you aren’t in a movie.
cake does sound rather perfect, but I need a sweets free day. Have not done well since Easter cough
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Everyone is talking about wombats. It’s because there are so many in politics. Last week I lost 2kg by changing the battery in my scales. I decided that was good enough.
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haha the thing is, i like wombats. such a dilemma.
Steve, I’m one step ahead, I don’t own scales ๐
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Oh this is brilliant
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Hi. Thank you for visiting, and for your kind comment!
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My pleasure
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