She didn’t say anything. Why wasn’t she saying anything?
But she had. She just couldn’t hear her.
She had always heard her through her heart, and now it was frozen to her cheeks.
He lifted her up as her chest was caving in. He sang instead. The words she had taught him when they met, years before. The ones she had heard from her mother’s friend. Before they never saw him again.
“Little girl, there’s safer ground…”
That ground. Rising up out of the sea of him.
Lyrics:
mother they are coming again
they come to shoot what we already lost
mother they are coming again
our silver covered by their rust
father they are coming again
they come to jail the things that i have seen
father they are coming again
burning minds to keep the ruin clean
no one is around
„little girl there’s safer ground
follow the sea and you will find that place
little girl there’s safer ground
come take your years and put them in their hands“
Beautiful V!
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Thank you so much! Another beer for you. I mean, us 🙂
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Yay beers!!
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Really nice. I feel like this could be a companion piece to the Hey There Little Girl piece I wrote many years ago.
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Left a comment on your poem. ❤
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And now, reading the two pieces together, they carry a resonance of that relationship even further. The long strain of grief, how it endures, how we need comfort, how we train others how we need comfort. Both alone are excellent, together they are really, really fantastic. I would call for marrying them together and asking this to be a guest blog at the GDG my friend, to help illustrate how real relationships work. Maybe, I can even work on my poem to help frame the two, perhaps develop the voice in my poem to the mother who is looking down on the couple. What do you think?
(oh… and the video link is no longer available).
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Thank you so much!!
And yes, if you like, I’d be honoured to have it on GDG. But I am wondering if you post it with your ‘Hey there little girl’ poem instead? Just becuase I think it is so cool they were written years and worlds apart but embrace a similar spirit even though about different things?
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That is what I was thinking – maybe pull them all together. Will tackle this probably over the weekend. Yay!!!
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I have to go…but yes, that would be great! Will you send it to me when you are done? I can’t wait to see it.
Bye for now! thanks for the visit.
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Wilco!!
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PS Steve, does the video link not work, because it still works here?
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Maybe it is a Singapore thing?
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I wondered…does the video on part one work, as it is the same song?
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I will have to check tomorrow… I am sans wifi this evening due to a move… ugh… there is a BS story to vent about!
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Feel free to vent at anytime!
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You move me, Vanessa ❤
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Thank you so much for saying! That means so much! ❤
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Oh, you’re so welcome! 💛
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Today I’d like to be cuddled and taken to safer ground, and I’m totally emotionally moved………. Oh the audio didn’t work for me, but I did enjoy the song…….
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I’m not sure why the audio doesn’t always work. It works on the computer and my phone, but not my tablet, and I thought it was up to date, so I am not sure.
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Oh the mysteries of technology, and I’ve no damn idea !!
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ugh, me neither!
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😉😏
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Oh wow, I’ve just checked out my Stats, looks like my poetry promotions on the cruise have paid off, my hits for the last 4 days have been 113, 150, 180, and 135 today, ah the mystical power of the ocean and alcohol 😆
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haha that’s awesome, Ivor. Sounds like a winning combination for sure lol.
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Good to revisit this one too, and I never did do what I had contemplated doing. Perhaps I still will with your permission? Your words are powerful and speak fully without anything I could add. Wonderful to revisit this one and again, I guess since I didn’t catch the song last time, to be able to catch it this time. A beautiful piece all around.
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Thank you again! I would love to see what you come up with!
(were you able to hear the audio of me reading as well? Some people haven’t been able to play it?)
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I did not see that… my obtuse brain!!! Will have to take another look. 🤓
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Heard it, loved it!
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Awww thank you.
I’m not really a fan of hearing myself, I’m in two minds about it.
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You are welcome. It is amazing how different the voices inside our head sound to those not in our head.
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It is! And it still catches me a bit!!
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My inside voices are easily confused though.
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haha oh boy, you are in good company!
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🤓😆🤔🤗🤓
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are these the faces of the voices inside? lol
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A fraction of them.
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Well i’m glad if 🤓dominates, and not 🤡
😁
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Is it Wednesday? Cause if it is Wednesday then the 🤡 is coming!!!
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