the air has turned cold.
my thoughts turning, unfold
and you turn,
as I’m tugging
on the ontological thread
that glistens in the tread
of your psyche.
the air has turned night
and this thread
warms me alive.
(Marble image and wedding image from Pexels.com)
Yes the nights are cold, and I turn, no creases to hold. nor unfold.
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🤗 cyber hugs Ivor
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I like hugs
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Something very warm about this verse. I could feel it’s beat , the words embraced me as I read.
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Hi Yasmin!
That’s so lovely to read, and I am so glad!
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Deep, penetrating blush of a poem
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Hi Anthony!
Thank you for your thoughtful words
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it sounds a bit sad, yet so tender and warm with this relaxing, meditative music!!!
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Yes, all of those things Anie. I am glad if you felt it 🙂
I was a bit more pensive than usual yesterday after church, in a good way, for a number of reasons.
I am very grateful my husband and I are on the same page spiritually. This came from that place.
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Oh I am glad for you about this. What do you mean on the same page spiritually? Religion? May I ask, what church you join?
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Thankyou.
My husband is a Lutheran pastor, so we are Lutheran 🙂
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It is a wonderful feeling Vanessa when you can pick this feeling from the thoughts of another, especially someone you are close to. Sometimes the trigger can come from the simplest word and the impact is as you use in your beautiful line, warms me alive.
Your wonderful poem has set a good path for the week. Thank you.
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Hi Davy! Thank you for your wonderful comment.
How are you?
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A pleasure Vanessa. Starting to get back on track thank you. It has been a frantic and mixed first half of the year. How are things with you?
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Has it? Well I am glad if you are feeling like things are settling down? Hope things are well!
We are okay, thanks. We are meeting with the head surgeon on Wed to discuss what is next for Darrin, but we are so happy things aren’t urgent. Very relieved. But he will still have some big, preventative decisions to make.
Could be a lot worse!
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I will keep everything crossed for you both and good to hear that things are not as urgent as you first thought.
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Thank you so much! Thanks so much for dropping by! 🌼
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Always a pleasure Vanessa 🙂
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🙂
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I like the complexities of your thread, Vanessa, and the idea of our human connections being made real.💙
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Thanks Steve! 💙
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Lovely piece – so nicely knit.
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Haha thanks Eugenia 😊
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😉
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