And while she was
clawing out
the sub conscious ponderings
on definition a, b or c
of her defeated-ness,
she saw their labyrinthine thread
had finally severed.
Her heart stilled,
begging for calibration,
a gentle reworking –
the intricate cut-outs of their pain
into simple shapes.
(this beautiful song, and video of estranged brothers reunited)
Diana
When I read you it seems you speak the peculiar language of my very person. Quirky, unexpected…. a little cryptic. It’s terrific 💕
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saynotoclowns
Wow Diana, I am sincerely honoured you think so.
And I love the description 😁 thank you!
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ortensia
You have a such wonderful personal way to write….straight to your readers soul
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saynotoclowns
Ortensia, what a lovely thing to say, thank you. I’m over the moon if anyone is touched by what I write.
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ortensia
No need to thank me darling,I just said what I think and feel😀so keep writing❤️
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saynotoclowns
I really appreciate that ❤️
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erroneouschoices
Begging for collaboration, I love that
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saynotoclowns
Oh, I think I like collaboration more! hmmm or maybe both somehow.
Thank you!
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ivor20
A gloriously insightful poem Vanessa, and this piece is especially more superb,
“Her heart stilled,
begging for calibration,”
I can’t play the music yet, my my computer is broken !!
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saynotoclowns
Ivor, thank you for such generous words!
How did your birthday go, btw?
Oh no! this is not good! Is it something fixable?
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ivor20
I had a lovely birthday weekend, going to see my niece April Foster sing in an Opera production was special, ☺️☺️
My brother is coming this afternoon, to try and fix it
🤗🤗
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saynotoclowns
Oh that sounds awesome! Where did she perform, in Melbourne?
oh three cheers for your brother!
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ivor20
A theatre complex in the old Northcote town hall, a lovely venue for the BK Opera group’s production, I’ll attach a link for the review, and April (Foster) received a nice review.
http://www.stagewhispers.com.au/reviews/abduction
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saynotoclowns
Well done April! Interesting concept in their adaptation.
I so admire sopranos who can handle those high notes!! You must be proud.
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ivor20
😊 She works so hard at her singing
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saynotoclowns
Is your sister musical too?
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ivor20
Slightly, but we’re all in awe of our April
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ivor20
April is on the right
https://photos.app.goo.gl/nCa88YoHAsvSGVu58
And after the show, my sister Miffy, me in the middle, and April
https://photos.app.goo.gl/PH83geZboE8nRYWR8
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saynotoclowns
Love the photos! There are definitely family resemblances 🙂
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Steve Simpson
Loved this enigmatic piece, Vanessa. I read it a few times, thought about sorrow, symbols and recalibration, and about buying a super vine rake. Finally my record player told me There’s nothing you can know that isn’t known. Good one, record player.
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saynotoclowns
Thank you so much Steve. I’m honoured if you love anything I write. I seriously laughed out loud when I read the rake comment you slipped in there. And your record player was obviously referring to the expert way Mr Helpful Guy was using the rake… 🙂
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Steve Simpson
You are definitely to be honoured, Vanessa. 🙂The Internet is a strange and amusing place. I only just bought the turntable, and I’m enjoying it immensely. That was … er … All You Need is Love.
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saynotoclowns
How generous Steve!
hahaha oh yes indeedy, that could be an understatement about the intrawebs, maybe, just a tad teeny bit.
Ah how wise of your turntable 🙂
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