“I can’t write like you,
with your weaving wrinkles
and dime shaped gold
your nesting tableaux
in colours that fold
so neatly in parameters
that have never been told…”
said Lily to her bear. Her very first bear. Still first after wonderful, adventurous, fun filled, pensively shaded years.
“Well, that’s because you aren’t a bear”.
This is so wonderful!!!!
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Hi!
Thank you so much!
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Aww. This is so sweet. Very original
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Thanks Lorraine! smile and hug
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Smile a d hug back
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It’s like Winnie the Pooh
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Is it? It’s been so long since I actually read it. My memory sucks. Although, I have a teeny bear called Christopher Robin.
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Yes, very similar style.
I believe it was John that told me of a book that’s all of Pooh’s intfinite wisdom quotes 🙂
Pooh was a philosophy major 😛
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Was that the Zen of Pooh book I never actually read?
Haha thanks for the reminder 😁
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I love the beautiful flowing description of the writing, Vanessa, and the tripletake with the bear who writes about writing exactly as she does. The wood ducks like it too.
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Hey Steve!
I was busy on your site that I didn’t see you were over here ha!
Thank you, and the ducks, so kindly!
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My pleasure, Vanessa. The wood ducks say “quack.”
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I will let Amelie, the bear, know. 🙂
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Now the wood ducks are consulting a baby book for names.
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what did they come up with? I don’t know the meaning, I have just always liked the name
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My nephew’s little daughter is Amelie. Once they found Daffy and Donald and so on were taken, the ducks were a bit disappointed. A couple chose Tape and Tile for some reason. 😑
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Is she? That’s lovely!
oh Daffy and Donald. Wow. It’s been years since I have thought of them. Well here’s a chance for their imaginations to soar…you know, like ducks, I mean, eagles 🙄
I’m kind of dense though…about Tape and Tile I mean? 🤷
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Flap flap. I don’t know why I wrote that, too silly to explain. It’s not you. Oh alright, reverse the order, put Duck first. 🙄
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This is the blog world Steve, nothing’s too silly 🤓🤡
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I’ll bear that in mind Vanessa. 🤪
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Beautifully expressed…and truly from your heart. 🙂
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Hi Charlie. Thank you so much 🙂
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You welcome my friend. 🙂
P.S I posted a new poem. You’ll like and agree with it 100%
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So beautifully expressed. Bravo.
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Thank you so much LA 🙂 that’s very generous!
and thank you for visiting
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My pleasure
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