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    like thoughts transparent and vein like Vanessa. I love your composition so much. and I love tattoos, its such a statement of permanence in world of impermanence

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      I seriously had a D alliteration thing going as I was writing this and chatting with you at the same time! Then I decided to change it up, it fit better for the story.
      I should have made it fit though, but the way my mind is lately, I most likely would have written ‘potato’ instead lol.

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    The last sentence is killer! Big and juicy and satisfies my hunger for words that refuse to stay silent in the reader’s mind! Hooray V 🤗💜💜

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      Haha thank you!
      I don’t blog as much as I used to, so I guess people are surprised when words appear. And considering my bouts of writer’s block lately, so am I! Lol.
      Yes, there are some tattoos I like, other kinds not so much. This was a metaphorical and very deep one she’s not quite sure what to do with.
      Thanks so much for your enthusiasm. I love it!

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      Hi!
      Thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
      I’ve never made a commitment to a visible tattoo. Plenty of invisible ones, like everyone. 😊
      My mother has one, and my twin brother has a couple, but it’s just never happened for me. But hey, who knows? I’m only middle aged. 😝

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