O burdens, I see you looking at me wondering what I will do withtheeyou getting back to the start of see and the art that shrunk inside of we the dancing child on a whirl of glee escaping truths that stifle three layers of self, instrinsically defensive. Now the wired psyche is unravelling ever so peacefully
O, wow! The rhyming scheme is very well executed.
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Hey Watt!
Thank you! You say such kind things 🙂
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So do you!!!
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haha shucks
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Beautiful piece.
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Hi!
Thank you. I appreciate that from you 🌸
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👌👌👌
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thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome 😁😁
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I love all of this! Lovely poem, wonderful to hear you read it and The Finn Brothers are genius!
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Thank you so much!
Yes, I agree!
Hey, how did birthday celebrations go? Have you recovered? 😁
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The birthday was a blast!!! Thank you! It was really perfect and I actually recovered much more quickly that expected. The danger is that now I have discovered the joy of the dirty martini!!!!!
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Oh I’m so glad, it sounds wonderful!
I’m not really a cocktail drinker but I had an espresso martini recently for the first time, and it was delicious! Hmmm might have to try some others too sometime 😁
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Oh, Espresso Martini!!!! I am usually strictly a wine drinker, but I wanted to try something new for my 50th, and I am so glad I did! Let me know how your exploration goes!
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I’m mostly wine, too.
And I will do! 😊
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Aaah this is amazing! I see you
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Hi.
What a gorgeous comment. Thank you
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Thank you kindly Angela 😁
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You’re welcome!
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You’ve executed this poem so magnificently good.
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Thank you Charlie!! 😊
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You are welcome. 🙂
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Absolutely gorgeous – the thought will linger for a while
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Shantanu, always so generous! Thank you!
Music is surely a gift of God, it’s helped me so much. 😊
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My pleasure always
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A beautifully flowing masterpiece…
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Wow. I don’t know what to say! Thank you, Lance. Very generous!
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You’re sincerely welcome!
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Beautiful!
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Hi. Thank you so much!
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Hello. You are welcome.
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Beautifully expressed, and great reading, Vanessa. To go back, to return to the child whirling, that innocence, is a beautiful dream. I suppose we need the defences, but perhaps there are moments when it is safe to lower the castle drawbridge. Either that or I have watched too much Game of Thrones. 😸
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Hi Steve.
Thanks so much! I had forgotten about this, and had trashed the initial post for some reason. Then I literally stumbled on my reading…I remembered then I had written it when I had heard a beautiful song that Steve Fuller had posted once… I had been through some serious depression and even lost interest in music. This inspired me to start enjoying the things again that used to fill my childhood life and heart. Being silly with this blog has also really helped 🙂
Game of Thrones?! haha. I have not seen one episode, I’m afraid.
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My pleasure, Vanessa. Sorry to hear about your depression. I find that being silly helps with many things (within reason or just beyond) but I guess a certain frame of mind is a prerequisite. Although I don’t have answers, I do have questions and sparrows and theories from my own experience. One is that nothing really leaves you, everything comes back, but transiently and fading quickly. I tell myself that this makes me a well-rounded person, and it is better than being a zombie. Apart from eating brains. Obviously.
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haha thank you for your thoughtful thoughtly thoughts.
Yes, better than a zombie!!
I have never tried to take myself too seriously, in context, of course. I believe life is too short for that! The times I have, have been a bit of a disaster!
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Whoops, forgot to post the link:
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Beautiful video
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I’m glad you liked it
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So lyrical and beautiful, I love your writing style.
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I’m honoured you think that! Thank you! 🌸
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You are very welcome. As an aside, I agree, we should always say no to clowns. And say it firmly!
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haha Yes! Shudder.
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I’m speechless – this is so good!
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I’m honoured you think that. Really.
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I do! 💜
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Aww lots of cake for you ❤
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