the snow
covers her stepped thoughts
overnight.
(The ones
leading to that door.)
Now
she walks across her floor boards,
each footfall
a different note.
She dances.
the snow
covers her stepped thoughts
overnight.
(The ones
leading to that door.)
Now
she walks across her floor boards,
each footfall
a different note.
She dances.
Ah the door…
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yes…that dang door
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Deep one, Venessa.
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thank you dear Yassy.
I was so inpired by the music, I’ve been drawn to his music a lot lately. Just beautiful.
The first piece is actually called “First” and it made me think of snow falling, and the rest appeared…
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🤗🤗🤗😘❤️
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💕😘🤗
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Love this poem so much. Deeply good. 🙂
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Hey Charlie! It always warms my heart that you love my writing. Thank you dear Poet 🙂
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂 Bless you so much.
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Thank you! Blessings on you too 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Simply great!
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Thank you!
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Whoa, Vanessa! This musical inspiration really works for you. So much beauty on it’s brevity. Loved it!!
😀
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Hey Watt! Thank you so much! That means a lot!! 🙂
I really do find it hard to write without music
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Really beautiful music — somehow I connected this poem to your previous one about the snow ball. Is this all taking place inside one?
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Hi. And no, that wasn’t my original thought, but I could see how it could go on as a story, considering the previous was an ash globe and there was healing needed etc.
It was more that I am so enjoying listening to his music, my thoughts were actually separate.
Thanks for your thoughts, B.
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You are welcome! I’ll be waiting for your next piece!
Also, I have a suspicion that you don’t appear on my Reader. I don’t know why, but this has happened before with other people I follow and I hate it.
I hope you’re well, my dear. Kisses!
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Really? That happens to me too. But I am not posting as much lately either.
And I am well, thank you dear B! Likewise! xxoo
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Profound and so pretty. Like the first snowfall.
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Thank you!
Isn’t that first snow just heaven?
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Absolutely gorgeous – loved it
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Thank you so much, Shantanu 🌸
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My absolute pleasure
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Something about silence and snow, Vanessa, and the ambiguity of the different notes, nicely understated. For me, snow is still mysterious. I read a short story about a child who listened for the postman in winter, heard his footsteps on the footpath later every day because of the snow, and he saw fog through the window building up outside. Turned out there was no snow or fog, that I couldn’t find the short story in a collection on my shelves, and I need a coffee. Mmm, maybe I’ll plagiarise it. Great music.
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haha Steve, way to go building up my anticipation about that story…now you must find/write it 😁
I agree…snow is mysterious and I am utterly captivated by it.
And thank you! I like understatement, and I appreciate the things you notice.
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I will start work on it immediately. Hahaha,
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Of course you will. Because you have nothing else to do 🤡🙏
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but… my time machine… 🤓
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hahaha my reply may have overflowed onto your site…
so many questions…so does that mean you have built it already, and so it would be put to good use now, you know, having all the time in the world…
which reminds me of a very funny video I saw once…maybe i have told you about it already…
there are answers in this video, I am sure of it Steve 😁
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I think I’ve clarified time machines sufficiently, i.e., not at all. I like the video: I always thought the Paleolithic diet made no sense, but have been avoiding eggs, especially if I met them in the street. I also thought there were some things I wasn’t confused about. Now I realise that was a mistake.
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prolific yet profound
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Thank you! What an interesting and kind comment.
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you are welcome
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