“adam and eve” (revisited)

Posted on December 16, 2019 by saynotoclowns Posted in Christian, PoetryTagged divine symphony, harmony, no to gender wars, peace, spiritual

crocheting continuity

in the weaving waves

of sound sublimity,

the embossing of the

dimensional Trinity

in the cerebral unity,

g(r)asped by incredulous senses converted

to heights of clarity –

the aching symphony

scaffolding the wholing

of peace.

(my favourite music from ‘the Nutcracker’. This performance is extraordinary).

Photo by Paul Gilmore on Unsplash

25 thoughts on ““adam and eve” (revisited)”

December 16, 2019 at 5:06 pm Reply
yassy says:

Cleverly done. Intellectual creativity ❤️🤗

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1. December 16, 2019 at 5:10 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  Hey Yassy! Thank you Lovely person. You’re so good to me. xo
  
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  1. December 16, 2019 at 5:12 pm Reply
    yassy says:
    
    You are welcome sweetie pie , it’s easy being good to the nicest person I know ❤️🤗.
    
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    1. December 16, 2019 at 5:19 pm Reply
      saynotoclowns says:
      
      Gah! I am going to frame this comment lol
      
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      1. December 16, 2019 at 5:37 pm Reply
        yassy says:
        
        🤗❤️
        
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        December 16, 2019 at 6:08 pm Reply
        saynotoclowns says:
        
        Hugs back dear Poet
        
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        December 16, 2019 at 7:24 pm Reply
        yassy says:
        
        Hugs hugs warm hugs 🤗
        
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December 16, 2019 at 5:38 pm Reply
In mind and out says:

That dance performance, and these words. Perfect lyrical grace and harmony 💜

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1. December 16, 2019 at 6:10 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  Isn’t it mesmerising? They make it look so effortless.
  Thank you dear Rachel! 💚
  
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  1. December 16, 2019 at 6:29 pm Reply
    In mind and out says:
    
    And you do such your words too!! Ballet and your poetry, a match made in heaven 💛
    
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    1. December 16, 2019 at 6:54 pm Reply
      saynotoclowns says:
      
      What a beautiful comment. Thank you.
      
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December 16, 2019 at 6:16 pm Reply
David Redpath says:

Wholeo Bibliopoetical, Vanessa 😎

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1. December 16, 2019 at 6:55 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  haha a wholeo hearted thank you, David. 🤓
  
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December 16, 2019 at 8:41 pm Reply
Blogging_with_Bojana says:

g(r)asped
A smart one.

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1. December 16, 2019 at 9:20 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  You’re awesome. Thank you.
  
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December 16, 2019 at 9:53 pm Reply
Watt says:

So vivid and sheer. Great piece, Vanessa!

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1. December 16, 2019 at 10:17 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  Hey Watt. Thank you!
  
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December 17, 2019 at 12:12 am Reply
pvcann says:

Wonderful

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1. December 17, 2019 at 9:26 am Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  Thank you so much Paul!
  
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  1. December 17, 2019 at 9:30 am Reply
    pvcann says:
    
    My pleasure 🙂
    
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    1. December 17, 2019 at 10:25 am Reply
      saynotoclowns says:
      
      🙂
      
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December 17, 2019 at 3:58 pm Reply
S Francis says:

So happy to be reading your writing again! Brilliant.

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1. December 17, 2019 at 4:00 pm Reply
  saynotoclowns says:
  
  Wow Steve, I really appreciate that. Thank you!
  
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  1. December 17, 2019 at 4:04 pm Reply
    S Francis says:
    
    You are very welcome! 🙏🙏🙏
    
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    1. December 17, 2019 at 4:05 pm Reply
      saynotoclowns says:
      
      🌸
      
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