“I thought it only fair to warn you, but the baby will come at dark. And you know how they like to prey.”
She shuddered as the courage in her spine parted ways, some into the atmosphere, the rest slipping into the earth. She knew he didn’t mean pray.
Overwhelmed with gratitude and relief that he had come, the baby moved inside her.
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When I woke this morning these words were in my head! What on earth had I been dreaming? I hadn’t thought about writing short stories, but maybe I’ve changed my mind…
Singledust
powerful read. write the short story V!
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saynotoclowns
Hi Gina! Thank you. I appreciate that, as I really love the way you write!
Maybe I will. But I am a little intrigued to maybe only write short snippets like this one.
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Singledust
and thats great! this is beautiful flash fiction! leaving a lot to the imagined. oh you write amazingly good words Vanessa. haha mine are just little lines. this was very strong. I liked it very much.
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saynotoclowns
Thank you! And I enjoyed writing it. Yes, that is what I like too, leaving things to the imagination.
You are so humble Gina. You’re lovely. 🙂
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Singledust
and you are always sweet to me. you should explore this more. as I have said before I start writing with a feeling. no thoughts. no words. just a feeling. I think I said too often it has become others mantra now! but do that. the words will flow. and you have the gift of deep contemplation. your pen will create the words.
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saynotoclowns
Gina, I really appreciate your encouragement, thank you!
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yassy
My heart was in my mouth as I read.
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saynotoclowns
Thank you for saying!
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S Francis
You, V! This was a great micro flash story… and I say GO FOR IT! Really nice, concise piece.
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saynotoclowns
Thank you so so much! I really enjoy doing it!
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S Francis
Flash fiction can be totally fun and addictive… you got a knack my friend!
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saynotoclowns
Oh my gosh, you said it. I am addicted. And thank you, that means a lot to me.
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S Francis
Smiling Poetry Geek Face
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saynotoclowns
That looks so poetic written out like that hahaha. I just posted another one…Ugh, I am addicted…
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S Francis
oh man…
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mahbuttitches
OOh I like this!!! Very evocative, lots of imagery with little text. Really enjoying these micro fictions Vanessa! “The courage from her spine separated” holy crap, I LOVE that. It gave me a chill!
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saynotoclowns
Hi! Thank you! I am so glad you like it. It’s my favourite so far. I am kind of addicted to writing these actually. I’m scared it’s going to deteriorate into pulp fiction haha, but it’s so fun!
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mahbuttitches
If you’re happy and enjoying it, who gives a crap what it’s called? I love it for sure 😊😊 the way you distill the emotions in such short phrases is nothing short of magnificent!! If it ends up with travolta dancing, hey it happens 🤣🤣
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saynotoclowns
Wow Daina! Thank you so much! I’m truly humbled.
hahahaha now that’s funny.
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